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  • 如何写好高考英语作文?
         近几年高考英语考试作文部分要求“使用较多语法结构和词汇”,因此要想得高分,除了要点和语言准确度以外,还必须在较复杂的句子结构或较高级的词汇上有所表现。句式单一,缺乏生气的文章,哪怕无任何错误也不可能得高分,相反“有些错误,但是为了使用较复杂结构或较高级词汇所致”,给分档次仍在最高档(21~25分)。
      一、以下四种手段是增加句子复杂性的常见方法,也是得高分的“亮点”。

      1.改变句子的开头方式,不要一味地都是主语开头,接着是谓语、宾语,最后再加一个状语。可以把状语置于句首,或用分词做状语等。

      [原文]We met at the school gate and went there together early in the morning.

      [修正]Early in the morning we met at the school gate and went there together.

      [原文]The young man couldn’t help crying when he heard the bad news.

      [修正]Hearing the bad news, the young man couldn’t help crying.

      2.在整篇文章中,避免只使用一两个句式,要灵活运用诸如倒装句、强调句、主从复合句、分词状语等。

      ①强调句

      [原文]My parents praised Ah Fu warmly. It had saved my little sister bravely.

      [修正]My parents praised Ah Fu warmly. It was our brave Ah Fu who had saved my little sister bravely.

      ②由what等引导的从句,此处的what相当于中文的“所……”,有很大的概括力,如:

      [原文]We had to stand there to catch the offender.

      [修正]What we had to do was (to) stand there, trying to catch the offender.

      What China has achieved in recent years is known through the world.

      China is no longer what it used to be.

      ③由with或without引导的短语。如:

      He sat in a chair with a newspaper in the hand.

      ④分词短语。如:

      Satisfied with the result, He decided to go on with a new experiment.

      ⑤倒装句。如:

      Only in this way can we achieve our goal.

      Never before have I seen such a wonderful film.

      ⑥省略句。如:

      If so, victory will be ours.

      You can make some changes wherever necessary.

      ⑦对比,这是中文中也常用的方法。如:

      Failure is not a crime, but failure to learn from failure is.

      When I play, I feel excited, and after it I feel relaxed.

      3.通过分句和合句,增强句子的连贯性和表现力。

      [原文]He stopped us half an hour ago. He made us catch the next offender.

      [修正]He stopped us half an hour ago and made us catch the next offender.

      [原文]We had a short rest. Then we began to play happily. We sang and danced.

      Some told stories. Some played chess.

      [修正]After a short rest, we had great fun singing and dancing, telling jokes and playing chess.

      4.学会使用过渡词。如:

      ①递进: then(然后), besides(还有), furthermore(而且), moreover(此外)等。

      ②转折: however(然而), but(但是), on the country(相反), after all(毕竟)等。

      ③总结: finally(最后), at last(最后), in brief(总之), in conclusion(最后)等。

      ④强调: indeed(确实), certainly(一定), surely(确定), above all(尤其)等。

      ⑤对比: in the same way(同样地), just as(正如), on one hand…on the other hand(一方面……另一方面……)等。

      5.注意使用不同长度的句子。

      二、对于“较复杂的词汇”,可以从以下几个方面着手。

      1.注意使用词组、习语来代替一些单词,以增加文采。如:

      [原文]A new railway is being built in my hometown.

      [修正]A new railway is under construction in my hometown.

      2.使用一些很有“洋味”的单词。如:

      Thank you for sharing the time with us.

      The way he views the world is very practical.

      3.避免重复使用某一单词或短语。如:

      [原文]I like reading while my brother likes watching television.

    [修正]I like reading while my brother enjoys watching television.




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